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Whispers in the Dark
a Great Mouse Detective fanfiction
Chapter 14 | Your move

illustrations.: prologue | 01 | 02 | 03 | 04 | 05 | 06 | 07 | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 13 | 14...
the chapters: prologue | 01 | 02 | 03 | 04 | 05 | 06 | 07 | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 13 | 14... (to be continued)

summary: AU - None believed that the hate-filled words of a little girl could still live on after more then 200 years, but when strange events start occurring in London the city's only hope of survival lies with one mouse ... and a rat?



OMG! :omg: Heaven help us! I updated! :la: - AND pleased with this :lol:

After such a long hiatus from art and almost everything else beside sleep, I am happy to bring you THIS! *yay for dorkish me! XD*

Thanks to the wonderful people who left a review with a suggestion for chapter 14's illustration, I actually unlazied myself and drew our favorite impossible-to-get-along-ithouth-sustaining-injury duo - Basil and Ratigan... PLAYING CHESS IN COOKIE'S KITCHEN! (who is a very lazy mole judging by the pile of plates on the counter ... well, at least the table looks clean) And lookie! Wood looks like wood! Thinker came back in the form of a hat! And Ratigan looks more like him then a hieroglyph! And I am hyper tonight :la:

Oh, ignore the rambling up there XD On a more serious note, I'm happy to be done with this. Although Ratigan's hands seem to be... wrong and Thinker can't seem to be keeping a steady size in my drawings, I am overall pleased with this one. Although the first two sketches for this one didn't seem right, I think some strange wish to try and doodle in SAI did the trick :3 It literally came flowing out! And I could even save paper! I LOVE SAI!!!! (only downside to this was that for some reason it didn't save right the first time and I had to re-do the whole sketch X( )

So - comments on the pic, comments on the chapter, silly chatter, critique (I WOULD LOVE YOU FOREVER!) ... anything would be welcome :wave:

Peace! :peace:



artwork and story © Jessica P. (2010)
Basil of Baker Street/The Great Mouse Detective © Eve Titus/Disney
please do not use without permission
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Critique by ~MarkBulahao Sep 12, 2010, 11:37:00 PM
I'm not an expert on cartoons but then I'm not an idiot either. :)

Well it seems like you've got the basics - expressive faces that bring a character to life and show personality, the exaggerated and varied body types and lively actions.

I like how it's not overworked but I think you could've done more with the lighting. You did good since the atmosphere is obvious and "feels right" but it's kinda confusing since the fireplace seems to be the main light source but there's some strong light on the big guy's tale and other parts of the scene.

But all in all it's nice piece of work.
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~GracieCouture Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg :iconhappyloveplz: !! This is simply amazing! I love pictures of the 2 together! Their expressions are amazing :D and the colours.. oh my my, you are an AMAZING artist!
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~SherlockHolmes90 Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Can you do a pic of Basil slapping Ratigan? I'd love to see that XD
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~binditheskunk Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
pardon me asking but whens the next chapter ?
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~Mikomi-sama May 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
hopefully sometime before I die... school's not helping in that department but hopefully come this july
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~binditheskunk May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ok
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~SherlockHolmes90 Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can't belive that they are playing chess instead of strangling each other! Man Cookie your good...
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~Mikomi-sama Sep 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Never underestimate the cook. Especially when they're blind as a... well... mole...
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~Tiger-Tomboy14 Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this chapter. You have allowed us to see another side of Ratigan. And the interactions between Basil and Ratigan are hilarious!
Amazing story. It keeps one on ones toes, yet allows them to "try" to solve the case. I am really want to know what happens...please continue the story...I am dying to know how it will all end!
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Mood: Joy ~Tiger-Tomboy14 Feb 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
For chapter 15, maybe you can do a picture of the scene where Dawson and Inspector Voles talking about how worried they are for Basil.

Friend showed me your pics and I checked out "Whispers of the Dark", now I'm hooked. It is really good. Keep up the good work!!!:)
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~luvkirby4ever Oct 18, 2011
Oh my goodness! My sister loves the Great Mouse Detective! I need to watch it again :D

I love the scenario here!
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