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WitD 08: The game is afoot

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Whispers in the Dark
a Great Mouse Detective fanfiction
Chapter 08 | The game is afoot!

illustrations.: prologue | 01 | 02 | 03 | 04 | 05 | 06 | 07 | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 13 | 14 ...
the chapters: prologue | 01 | 02 | 03 | 04 | 05 | 06 | 07 | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 13 | 14 ... (to be continued)

summary: AU - None believed that the hate-filled words of a little girl could still live on after more then 200 years, but when strange events start occurring in London the city's only hope of survival lies with one mouse ... and a rat?


Do not let the picture fool you! as it seems to be my intention these days XD This chapter has more to it then meets the eye! But yes, Olivia did make it all the more interesting :meow:

As for the pic ... ME LIKES BACKGROUNDS! My, I can't believe I forgot how much I loved making them ... And since I know you may plan on saying that "Olivia is smaller then that!" I'll just say "Mrs. Judson did point out that she grew" ;P

Unfortunetely ... we don't have Ratigan up today :( I know I promised you he'll be here. He actually was present in the chapter now a few days ago, but the thing was getting too long and well ... it simply was too much. But I'll think up a way to make it up for you (*Brinatello might have and idea on what I'm talking about here ;) hint: it has something to do with ... tailors!)

So that's it for another two weeks! Stay in touch for more! while I still can, that is XD





artwork and story (+ Thinker) © Jessica P. (2010)
Basil of Baker Street/The Great Mouse Detective © Eve Titus/Disney
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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Vision: More and more I'm impressed by her strive to create vivid and beautiful backgrounds. The views of mainly indoor occurrences are what she does best and here, it's another addition to a fantastic scene, in this case, Basil's sitting room. 5.0

Originality: It's a first to see a bee sitting in a big red chair and looking stressed out while a child mouse looks heroic at the same time. Again, when it's for a scene in a chapter, you won't find this anywhere else...unless someone duplicates it. So again, she's got a drawing here of something that quite possibly has not been done by another. 5.0

Technique: The same style of softness in colors and sharp lines are done once more along with the dark corners and vivid effects of light, shadows and three-dimensional objects. The technique continues to remain at a professional animated feature level, so to speak. 5.0

Impact: Olivia feels energetic and ready to take on the world while poor Thinker is ready to fall over with exhaustion. I feel happy for Olivia's optimistic attitude towards the rescue attempt as well as sympathetic towards Thinker who looks like she needs a cup of water. 5.0